If you aim to write clear, informative, persuasive English, you should prefer strong verbs to weak verbs. Usually, weak verbs are general and dull, while strong verbs are specific and expressive.
By far, the most common weak verbs are to be and to have.
Example, with to be
WEAK: “...believes her father was instrumental in the writing of the Navajo Code Talkers codebook... ” (Source) (Boldface added.)
STRONG: ...believes her father helped write the Navajo Code Talkers codebook...
STRONGER: ...believes her father co-authored the Navajo Code Talkers codebook...
Example, with to have
WEAK: “The new Elector, Charles Albert, clearly had an affection for the Wittelsbach [a famous diamond] [pictured] because during his lifetime he had its setting altered several times, each more beautiful than the last.” (Source) (Boldface added.)
STRONG: The new Elector, Charles Albert, clearly loved the Wittelsbach...
STRONGER: The new Elector, Charles Albert, clearly cherished the Wittelsbach...
The Takeaway: When you fear you have written some weak copy, here’s a quick way to strengthen it: Count the instances of to be and to have. If there are a great many, replace several with strong verbs. In a 1,500-word article, for example, even ten or twelve replacements will make a noticeable difference. As you write or edit, always prefer strong verbs to weak verbs. It will become a habit, and it will improve your writing forever.
A Good Resource: I recommend you read this lesson from the writing center of The University of North Carolina at Greensboro. From time to time, re-read it to gauge your progress.
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If you're going to use my work as an example of "weak" writing you should at least have the courtesy to cite your source.
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I apologize for the error. I have corrected the link so that it points to your Adee Dodge biographical notes page, which contains the text I discussed.
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