Mixed metaphors can be amusing. However, we writers are usually more interested in informing and persuading our readers than in amusing them. Mixed metaphors may distract our readers and impede information and persuasion.
Example of a mixed metaphor
Blogger POLITICO writes, "Tax hikes, by any name, are a non-starter for a party that forged its brand on the mantra of lower taxes..."
Example of a mixed metaphor
Columnist David Brooks uses the expression, "the mother of all no-brainers."
Example of a mixed metaphor
Blogger Fred Reed opines, "She [Maureen Dowd] writes as if she were fifty, a tad overweight and, having grossly overestimated her value in the meat market, missed the train. (I have a federal license to mix metaphors like that.)"
The Takeaway: Mixed metaphors can distract your readers. In some cases, they make your prose impossible to understand. Ideally, you should have someone edit your copy, because it is difficult to spot your own mixed metaphors.
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Thursday, October 13, 2011
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Love your examples. I fear many people mix their metaphors.
ReplyDeleteThose are great examples. I tend to mix metaphors when I'm sleep deprived. :)
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